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Thoughts
Contributed by
emptythoughts
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 07:08:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Die
Die
Cut
Smash
like a broken record they play
i call them my thoughts
i call them my pain
I bang my head
nobody cares
I slit my wrists
do they want me to die?
I jump in front of the train
would anyone cry?
Of course not!
why do they lie?
I swallow the pills
My throat burns as they go
...15....16....28....34...
just a blank stare
Hanging from a rope
for the whole world to see
yet nobody is looking at me
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2004-03-16 19:08:09]
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Re: Thoughts
(User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 07:26:02 PM AEST
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My big ? would be... is this really ur thoughts?
Is this what u really want?
Good poem... good rhyming...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Thoughts
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:45:41 PM AEST
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| something is REALLY wrong with you... but it makes for a REALLY great poet. keep writing, but please dont EVER do what any of these poems say...and if your really thinking about it...get help |
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