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Take Me Back
Contributed by
perfection
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Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:58:41 PM in AEST
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Take me back in time
When my days were brighter
I’d actually have a pleasant rhyme
I didn’t worry about being lighter
Life was as easy as a snap
I had many carefree ways
Something’s wrong? Sit on mom’s lap.
The best times were birthdays
Now that times are changing constantly
And I start to have more fears
I start to wonder about honesty
If when I talk anyone hears.
People start to judge
And care how they look
People start to push instead of nudge
You don’t get a toy, instead a book
Take me back to then
I could live my life freely
I can remember when
I didn’t want people to look at me
Maybe I was wrong
Times haven’t changed a lot
My life is like a song
That isn’t being bought
I don’t have a story to tell
That would be worth listening to
If I do something wrong people yell
And feelings become untrue
The lies are spoken everyday
Even when nothing is said
Nothing can take me to better days
When the sun would shine as I got out of bed
Take me back now please
Before I get hurt again
I hate it when you tease
And say what your doing isn’t a sin.
February 4, 2004
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Re: Take Me Back
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 06:14:36 PM AEST
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If only I had a time machine. I sure could relate to this one. *Sighs*
A wonderful poem by the way. Kie |
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Re: Take Me Back
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 11:21:05 PM AEST
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Great write! I relate. Me likeys. :P
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Take Me Back
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by Pompous on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 07:59:28 AM AEST
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That was PERFECT!!! I really feel like this a lot now days...life just gets complicated and you wanna go back to those days where you didn't have any responsibility all you had in your mind was having fun with friends...amazing write I love it
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