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Spiral Stairs
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:45:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Down the spiral stairs, into the shadow of the dark.
I find myself in a world of pain, and with only time it will be marked.
As I fall deeper into this life, which can not be deceived.
I fight myself, but yet I have not perceived.
Perceived how I got into this chain.
That's left me feeling so constrained.
I feel that I need to justify my concerns.
But It's so hard to let go of my wrong turns.
But I guess that's how it goes,
until I over come these deathblows.
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2004-03-16 15:45:51]
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Re: Spiral Stairs
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by SAT on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:03:14 PM AEST
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| i really enjoy this poem. dark poetry is what i like reading, but not what i like writing. It was well expressed and well wr |
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Re: Spiral Stairs
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:15:29 PM AEST
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incredible with a strong life message in it. Your right we do get into a chain or an ongoing circle at times but it can be broken to lead us to a happier path.
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