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Golden Streets
Contributed by
Kellros
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Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:24:03 PM in AEST
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Golden streets of promise,
brought onto me,
to live by and ponder,
everything precious to me
Yonder at things yet to come,
people living, people singing their song,
people laughing, people dreading & tears,
people facing up to reality,
people facing up to fears
Grains of sand, fall onto me,
and the wind blows them away...
Suffering comes onto me, like everyone else,
and all that times does is decay
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2004-03-16 15:24:03]
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Re: Golden Streets
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:07:21 PM AEST
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Fast thinker... when u get inspired u gotta write it down... mmmm... sounds alot like me LOL.
Great write... I loved it!
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Re: Golden Streets
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:43:32 PM AEST
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Worthwhile thoughts put together nicely.
Stitch |
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Re: Golden Streets
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 07:29:28 PM AEST
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I concur with the previous two - this is a nice observation, well transmitted.
Good work. |
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