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I Need That Kick!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:52:06 PM in AEST
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i can't stop crying,
though, i'm not alone,
but it hurts all the same,
as my soul turns to stone!
even when i'm happy,
in a rebelled foce, thoughts come,
it leaves me bleeding,
and feeling sore, but numb!
i love the pain,
when things are released,
the harder is the better,
but then it's harder to cease!
then i face it again,
with bloodied marks, turning to scars,
wanting to do it more and more,
as it's my kick, to heaven and the stars!!
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deathdrop
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2004-03-16 14:52:06]
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Re: I Need That Kick!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:55:46 PM AEST
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amazing. very well put, i loved it.
apollo |
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Re: I Need That Kick!
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by lildrama04 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:25:53 PM AEST
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| hey I just read this poem and I think that you need help and all of your poems are just a little bit distubing I think that maybe just maybe you could learn to live your life the way that it's supposed to be you where never meant to kill yourself your parents are just jackass you don't give a damn about you or anyone else. Would you please take this into consideration for me even though I'm not a suicidal maniac like you are. |
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