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Be Free

Contributed by jbrow on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:27:11 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

My life feels like it’s going to hell. I have got younger siblings’, and
they act older than me. I have got a mother; That doesn’t want me to say, or
do anything to them. I just want to be free. I just want to go to a place;
Where’s no one has a hold on me. I just want to be free. Can you hear me?
I have got a father; That doesn’t really care about me. When I was a
kid; He used to beat me down real bad. I can still recall praying to die. All he
used to do; When he came is drink, and get high. I just want to be free. I just
want to go to a place; Where’s no one has a hold on me. I just want to be
free. Can you hear me?
I want to believe in God, but sometimes; I don’t think that he hears me.
Hear me when I pray. Sometimes I think why; Would he care about me
anyway? When I come to him to pray. My life feels like a deep pit that I can’t
get out of. O my lord can you help me; I’m in my own personal hell. I need
some help right now, I just want to be free. I just want to go to a place;
Where’s no one has a hold on me. I just want to be free. Can you hear me?
Sometimes it feels like my body; Is trying to shut down on me? I can
see the angels coming to take me home. I’m free, I’m free, free, free.

Copyright Â© jbrow ... [ 2004-03-16 14:27:11]
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Re: Be Free (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:04:21 PM AEST
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perfection. your words are true and i hope that those expierences have turned you into a good person although they may have been rough.

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