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you name it
Contributed by
putteragain
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Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:46:28 PM in AEST
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All to recent things have changed
in my mind or reality...unsure
My treasures have lost thier luster
creations man made...not pure
Feelings of unwant i face
my hurt now begins...to stir
The smell of rage overwhelms
stench blinds my eyes...blur
Acceptance is futile in hell
and in this im all to...sure
Copyright ©
putteragain
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2004-03-16 12:46:28]
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Re: you name it
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:28:21 PM AEST
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A fascinating write. Full of despair and uncertainty. What's up?
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Re: you name it
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:58:07 PM AEST
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| Well written! Really good job! |
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Re: you name it
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:25:42 PM AEST
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oooh! your hurting! good write
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Re: you name it
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:20:15 PM AEST
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| This touched my heart and screamed with lost despair. So sad to read but wow did you express yourself well. Kie |
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Re: you name it
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 11:28:38 PM AEST
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| beautifully expressed feelings, but i am sending you a huge hug my dear friend, ((((michelle)))))) love nessa |
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