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Silver Blade so Sharp
Contributed by
liquidchaos
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:36:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Oh silver blade so sharp
Hear my merciful cries.
Take this pain away
And give me your pleasure
With your sinful caress
You cut open the escape
For my worries to flow out
And slowly down my arm
'Till I press it to my lips
And the crimson hatred burns my throat
In ecstasy.
And so through the art of cut
I feel I am fine again.
Untill I come back to myself
And once again plunge into my darkness.
Copyright ©
liquidchaos
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2004-03-16 12:36:36]
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Re: Silver Blade so Sharp
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by arden on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:52:09 PM AEST
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sad but true. nice write i really like it.
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Re: Silver Blade so Sharp
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by ChaosBound on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:22:38 PM AEST
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wow nice!
Thank you.
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Re: Silver Blade so Sharp
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:49:12 PM AEST
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wow!
this one is really good. i love every bit of it!
every word fits together wonderfully with the one in front, and behind.
i like where you have written "the art of cut", that's the pretty way of putting it, so it sort of high-lights what you've written with a thought that is o'k to do it. well, that's what i think any way... keep it up! i've notest all you work so far, is excellent!
~deathdrop~
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