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temptation
Contributed by
merry
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 10:16:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
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my blood runs cold
against rough stones
you throw like accusations
without hesitation
until silence answers
the inner quiet
sound ceases
heartbeats slow
to hear the last word
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(!)
*{~*~}*
(!)
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temptation
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-03-16 10:16:04]
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Re: temptation
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 10:31:15 AM AEST
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| wow theirs a vibe about this that i really like i think its how the words flow, keep up the good work! |
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Re: temptation
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:14:49 PM AEST
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not a vibe Loopy....more like standing in water and grabbing a 220 line. For so few words you just blew me away Gaille.
Very well done is an understantment,
Roses for my diasy
Larry |
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