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Bloodstain
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:37:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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He pushes you angrily
You stumble and fall
You hit the ground hard
In the middle of the hall
You know he's drunk
You can see it in his eyes
He promised he would stop
Just another of his lies
You taste blood in your mouth
When he slaps your face
The fear in your soul
You can't erase
Today is different
You won't come back
He's too far gone this time
And delivers smack after smack
You're begging and crying
But he can't hear you
To make the pain stop
It's the darkness you pursue
You finally reach it
As you tumble down the stairs
You know it's over
And say your prayers
It's finally done
There's no more pain
Your body lays still
On ground covered in a bloodstain
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JadedExistence
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2004-03-16 00:37:39]
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Re: Bloodstain
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:44:14 AM AEST
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Woo this is so sad but written well.
I know this sort of thing happens all the time and it's heart breaking.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Bloodstain
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:36:25 AM AEST
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Ohh so sad
the end of this got to me
really bad....... I just had
a friend who killed her self
and was covered in her
bloodstain.....Very good write tho....
.......Love.......AnGel........ |
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Re: Bloodstain
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:41:14 AM AEST
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| Ow. That was a very sad write and made me angry as well to think that it's common in our society nowadays. Well done. |
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Re: Bloodstain
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by Pompous on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:04:26 AM AEST
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| a problem that no-one should ever experience...well written |
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Re: Bloodstain
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:59:27 PM AEST
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this reminded me of a Nickleback song good to see that u to are against the abuse of women... good poem brought us into the fear that abused ppl feel.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Bloodstain
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:52:16 AM AEST
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| OMG!!!!!!!! This is so sad. The Hell a woman has to go through. Such a disturbing read. *S* Cynthia |
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