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The lover's kiss
Contributed by
poemwritingdude
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Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:18:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The kisser’s love,
The lover’s kiss,
Is the feeling I will always miss
The thought of you sends pain
shooting directly up my spine,
yet it also sends a soothing echo
sounding in my mind
and the echo tells of beauty
and of great things beyond thought,
and the greatest things about you
no one else has every sought
but the love that lasts between us
is not of happiness and grace,
one ignores the other
while the other hopes and waits,
and these hopes consist of love,
that the both will share together,
and the wait is locked inside the pain
that will surely last forever,
and the pain that has been suffered,
and all that it took away,
can be put behind us tonight,
and we can start off fresh today,
but that hope has all been lost,
in the others that you love,
and it is now gone forever,
lost and forgotten…
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2004-03-16 00:18:09]
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Re: The lover's kiss
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by arden on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:29:15 AM AEST
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very sad but so awesomely written. i loved this poem. it pulls you in. wonderfully done. keep it up.
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Re: The lover's kiss
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:31:05 AM AEST
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A bit sad but u did a great job writing this. It makes a person think.
luv, huggs,
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