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It's All Wrong
Contributed by
JadedExistence
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:43:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It's sad really
When you think about
How quickly trust can be destroyed
How easily hearts can be broken
How short innocence really is
How carelessly people play with feelings
How calmly we will shatter souls
And at the same time
How long the pain lingers
How deep the fears run
How much love people can't give
How strong some have to be
How much happiness is just out of reach
It's all wrong
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JadedExistence
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2004-03-15 21:43:58]
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Re: It's All Wrong
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by persia on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:50:01 PM AEST
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Yeah i Feel ya!
It's all wrong- dats where ur poem came from-da wrong
gr8 write
persia |
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Re: It's All Wrong
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:57:43 AM AEST
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| Short, sweet, succinct, and very true.And I believe it came from your heart.Our hearts speak volumes, even when we think they are dead.Write on (pardon the pun). ; 0 ) |
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Re: It's All Wrong
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:49:40 AM AEST
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I totally agree.....It is sad
when trust is destroyed
and hearts are broken......
nice write....
........Love.......AnGeL....... |
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