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The Truth
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:10:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've never missed you this much before
I tried to get away from the reality
But I can't take in anymore
Cause the truth has hit me
That you don't even need me
Finally I realize there's nowhere to go
And no more reason to hide what I know
My empty heart
And dying soul
Tear me apart
Everytime I fall
I just want to cry
Hold you again
Baby tell me why
You're not my friend
I've never been this close to giving up
Crushed by endless pain
That I have no strength to stop
Love is so easy to complicate
And not notice untill it's too late
And I'm so used to looking into your eyes
I once believed they were uncapable of lies
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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2004-03-15 21:10:21]
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Re: The Truth
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:22:15 PM AEST
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the confusion of lost friendship(love) is never easy conveyed. You've done a good job here.
tt |
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Re: The Truth
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:22:35 PM AEST
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i know this feeling well..happened to me a few yrs back..but stay strong theres always someone better out there for u...good write!^_^
luv always |
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Re: The Truth
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:52:16 PM AEST
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Girl, you said a mouthful to coin an old phrase.
I dont think you have any idea how this hit me.
Very well done
A long stemmed rose for this one
Larry |
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Re: The Truth
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:06:34 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write you got here, the emotion potrayed well. |
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Re: The Truth
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by kalika_vidya on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:17:34 AM AEST
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| welldone..K |
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