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Graduation Day
Contributed by
HedderMarie
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:40:03 PM in AEST
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I've waited so long,
For this day to come,
As I squirm impatient in my seat,
Under this scorching June sun.
I can hear the voices all around me,
Calling out names to their destinies.
Walking toward the future in a cautious stride,
Life we now must abide.
I get nervous thinking about the upcoming moments,
In my seat,
Will I walk tall,
Or will I fall from under my feet?
The time is getting closer,
Everyone will be watching me,
My family expierencing my accomplishments,
And about to follow my dreams,.
I have to stop thinking,
As I get up to stand in line,
The people in my row are being called,
Like rare diamonds it's their time to shine.
The sun is reaching towards me,
It's my time to stand tall,
As I walk towards the stage,
My name finally is being called.
Heather Marie Hutchins
Copyright ©
HedderMarie
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2004-03-15 20:40:03]
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Re: Graduation Day
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by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:55:42 PM AEST
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cool poem
i still have a 2 years till graduation lol, sounds exiting though |
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Re: Graduation Day
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:30:24 PM AEST
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o i know this feeling so well..i just graduated last may...but i still reember everything....enjoy everyday u have in highschool and cherish every memory...i had a blast in highschool....good write and good luck!
luv always |
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Re: Graduation Day
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:24:48 AM AEST
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Hang in there....
I'm going to college to get my
nursing degree........
I've got one more year to finish....
Then I'll Graduate....
........Love.........AnGeL........... |
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Re: Graduation Day
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:36:38 AM AEST
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| Good poem on an unusual subject congrats from bernard. |
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Re: Graduation Day
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by ammalu on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:58:36 AM AEST
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touching - good write - keep it up.
--with all good wishes for a bright future |
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Re: Graduation Day
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by buchi on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:29:07 PM AEST
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| Hedder Marie...congratulations!!...are you majoring in English Lit....one great write... |
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Re: Graduation Day
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by Kirby on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:39:30 PM AEST
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| Yes this was a good poem. I graduated the second of this month and yes it feels just like you have put it in this poem. Not everyone is ready to grow up and face the real world. Great write. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: Graduation Day
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by Psyche on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:54:26 PM AEST
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| Wow! That really brought back the anticipation of graduating... I FELT this way in high school - so much, in fact, I was a no-show to my undergrad and graduate school ceremonies! Nice Job, Heather! |
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Re: Graduation Day
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by MissEm on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:19:58 AM AEST
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I love this piece -- I just graduated.
Funny you should mention tripping. No, I didn't trip, but I got really nervous and confused, and wound up walking behind the podium when we were clearly supposed to walk in front of it. People laughed, my family didn't get a picture, embarassing times.
Anyway, I can relate to the feeling this poem portrays
Thank you
~Emily~ |
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