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Untitled
Contributed by
Tedi
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:09:04 PM in AEST
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They tell me who to love
They tell me what to do
But what do they know about me and you
I know who to love
I know what to do
Would they understand the feelings I have for you
But what if I don't
How could I understand
Do they know
What would they do
If they knew I felt something for you
Is this real
Is this true
I've never felt something as real as you
How do I know
I wish I knew
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Tedi
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2004-03-15 20:09:04]
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Re: Untitled
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:31:08 PM AEST
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Love gets you like that, doesn't matter what age or location cupid's arrow always has us trying to work things out, we very rarely succeed.
tt |
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Re: Untitled
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by AmandaBeth on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:42:04 PM AEST
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| I have felt like that.. Not sure exactly if what you feel is real or what others want you to feel.. very good |
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Re: Untitled
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:04:32 AM AEST
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A-W-E-S-O-M-E write.....
I know the feeling.....
Great write.......
........Love......AnGeL...... |
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