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A look back
Contributed by
bluestar
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 06:47:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A year later I look back
On that relationship that we had
And now I don’t know why it was so hard to say goodbye
People tried to tell me the person you really were
I never quite believed them
I didn’t understand why you would lie
But I did miss you for a long time
After you told me that our relationship wasn’t right
I cried just about every night
It hurt so much…. more than you’ll ever know
My heart was broken
My appetite gone
But to you I was just another girl
Nothing special, no one to hold on to
But now that it’s been a year I feel so much better
And through all the pain and sorrow
I don’t regret a thing
I learned so much from what you’ve done
And it’ll surely stay with me for relationships to come
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2004-03-15 18:47:19]
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Re: A look back
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by Lionel on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 06:51:53 PM AEST
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Re: A look back
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by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 07:32:38 PM AEST
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writting about your experience is a very good sign that you're moving on
great write
i'm looking forward to reading more of your work |
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Re: A look back
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:39:47 PM AEST
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this is sad but there is so much strenght in it...glad u could move on and smile after everything thats happen..
luv always |
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Re: A look back
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 11:23:42 AM AEST
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You know what they say about hindsight being twenty twenty....
I think it is fantastic that you do not have regrets and are moving on. Lots of strength shone in this poem. I commend you... Kie |
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