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Contributed by emptythoughts on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 06:30:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



You tell me you love me
You tell me you care
You say you want to help
even when it's hard to bear
You want to help me get better
return me to how I used to be
Happy
Sarcastic
Funny
A friend to those in need
But don't you see my friends,
that you are chasing after a ghost?
Do you see that that me is already dead?
I try to be that girl that you want me to be
but she is long gone
and I must have died too
and returned in this body
I feel confused,
cuz I know her life well
but am unable to fit in the way that i should
I don't want to ruin the life that she (I) had
just in case she may ever return
but living in here is worse than hell,
trying to be what I'm not
or what I am
Both lead to the destruction of her carefully built life
You wish for her to return,
but you are poking at a dead corpse
just because my body is here
does not mean that I am still alive
So please, do not cry when I die
for i am not the girl you once loved




Copyright © emptythoughts ... [ 2004-03-15 18:30:15]
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Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:49:53 AM AEST
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"But don't you see my friends,
that you are chasing after a ghost?
Do you see that that me is already dead?"

Those are brilliant lines. You have crafted an amazingly heartfelt poem, I can relate to this more than you know.


Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 07:37:57 PM AEST
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Y do I have a feeling this poem is directed at me...? The words u share sadly remind me of someone special in my own life... someone I care about too... Ican relate to this more than u know...
Great write...
~Donna~


Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:51:30 PM AEST
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wow that may have been the best one yet. :) thank you for sharing




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