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Write My Lil' Poems
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 05:19:29 PM in AEST
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I just write my lil' poems for you all to read
And try and mind my own business... u see...
I don't need to go to the forums or PM anyone to state my beliefs
Just read it in between the lines of the text I write or the comment I choose to leave
For not every poem online do I choose read...
Or choose to comment on...
I just write what's in my heart at that moment in time
Whether it's deep emotion... or pain felt deep inside
Whether it's happy or whether it's sad
Whether it's about God, His love, a friend or the love of a friend or me
It's what's in my heart to write
It's just so plain to see...
If you all read 'em... you all read 'em...
If you all don't .... you all don't...
If you all like 'em... you all like 'em...
If you all don't .... you all don't...
It's all up to you... it's your choice...
That's one thing that God gave us...
A freedom to choose...
If you believe in Him... that's great... that's fine...
If you don't... well... that's between Him and you... when comes the time
It doesn't upset or discourage me none
Because I am not of this world... I just have to live in this world... with all of the same problems that you all face too
I'm here if only for but a lil' while... 'cause I'm but a shadow just passing through
I am like the rest of you though... when my time comes to leave this world behind...
So be it... I can't change what destiny lies ahead...
I just have to go with the flow of it...
Because you see... by that time... I'll be dead!
It won't matter to me none then...
I hope my time on this earth though...
Counts for something that been positive and good...
It's not what I was born with... it's not what I have now... it's not what I'll gain in the future...
Or even what I'll leave behind... that's important
It how I've lived this life on my journey back to my Heavenly home
Personally, I thought posting our poems, stories, songs or whatever and meeting fellow writers was what this site was supposed to be about...
Commenting... good or bad... on each other's body of work
Without getting mad...
That's what's important here... not what we believe and/ or don't believe
That's up to you... thank God... not me!!
I just write my lil' poems for you all to read...
Copyright ©
kidpoet_213
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Re: Write My Lil' Poems
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by Dawny on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 05:27:41 PM AEST
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Wow its a revolution, both AliB and I have posted similar poems today.
Well written, I like it
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Write My Lil' Poems
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by lostlove on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 05:44:12 PM AEST
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Now that I am not alone. Thank you
Adamo absens atqui incomitatus agnosco |
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Re: Write My Lil' Poems
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 06:25:47 PM AEST
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I couldnt agree with you more strongly. Just because someone doesnt like the message you give, or doesnt think you said it just right, in the "proper poetic way " as they see it, is no reason for anyone to hold back the words of their heart. There isnt one person on this site who has the right to tell anyone how to express themselves. As long as it isnt a personal attack on another person at this site ,I say keep on writing.
Very well said
Roses
Larry
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Re: Write My Lil' Poems
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:47:56 PM AEST
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| write on! this site was founded upon friendship, love and encouragement, and no one has to be here or particpate if they do not like how we do things, everyones freedom of expression is valued, respected and i for one do not want anyone to stop writing because of a few who think they know better than the majority, you keep writing, this was wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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