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net speed
Contributed by
merry
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:35:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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_______________________
waking up to you
sun shine inside the circle
bring about the fire within
I am breathless
eyes closed
orange glow inside my head
hearing you from afar
distance is nothing
touch is constant
connection made
what is this attraction
getting closer
to the real thing
the scraping of teeth on skin
tantalizing blue eyes
remind me of sky
how did you do this to me
falling through space
time lapse photography
winking at the moon
sigh at the end
of the ride
fillied with delight
Copyright ©
merry
... [
2004-03-15 16:35:14]
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Re: net speed
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by Stitch on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:53:57 PM AEST
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They just keep coming. As always, I can relate.
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Re: net speed
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by arden on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 05:04:46 PM AEST
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nicely written. wonderful job i really like it. keep em comin.
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Re: net speed
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 10:46:42 PM AEST
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brilliant and beautful as is all your vivid breathless poetry, hugs n' love daisy*nessa
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Re: net speed
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 10:50:13 PM AEST
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hehe wow Gaille...this is some hot stuff here, and written perfectly as you always do. Somebodies caught your attention I take it? :oP
Very well done
Roses for a daisy with a hot flash
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