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I'm Hurting So Much!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:22:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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i'm bleeding again,
my clothes are blood-stained,
i cry behind my frame,
i'm locked in again!
i'm frozen with the plague,
it rules in it's own way,
it's leaving a stain,
no nice words can stop this game,
vicious words bring on pain!
stop! SAYING WHAT YOU SAY!
please, go way,
i'm haunted all day,
i won't ecape sane,
my brains,
so aflame!
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deathdrop
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2004-03-15 14:22:29]
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Re: I'm Hurting So Much!
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:22:21 PM AEST
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| Very good piece i hope you find peace soon! |
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Re: I'm Hurting So Much!
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by MrWrite on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:23:26 PM AEST
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| You'll get through this time, I'm sure of it. Just keep on writing. It helps to get these thoughts and feelings down on paper. Great job. |
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Re: I'm Hurting So Much!
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by lildrama04 on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:26:37 PM AEST
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| This is a really great write I hope that you are over that who suicide thing. I know that what I wrote to you the last time that I talked to you but you know what it's the whole truth im me if you ever really want to talk I have gone through everything that you are going through right now believe me I know how it feels. |
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