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Would You Notice?
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:11:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i twist, i bend,
i can't, pretend.
that dreams don't mean much,
far beond life's, a colder touch.
i close my eyes,
i receive no surprise.
i know it's all hear,
beneath my skin, and my fears.
the drowning feeling, it's always round,
but still no one see's me, as i fall down.
i hit my head, until my nerves system crashes,
and i CAN hide the marks, from the painful slashes!
you never notice, you never see,
i want to bleed! my thoughts say to me...
i could go and do it, right now,
how long before you find me?
and my bloodied broken crown?
would you even notice, i wasn't around?
how long would i be lying, dead on the ground?
it makes you think, don't it?
what some one can do,
would you ne upset?
would it not touch you?
i could go and do it!
my depression, you don't see,
my smile is my shell,
but i'm broken in me!
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2004-03-15 14:11:06]
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Re: Would You Notice?
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:18:57 PM AEST
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| Wow this is powerful, i have been there, if you ever need me you can im me, this is really good though you have a great talent! I hope things begin lookin up for you! |
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Re: Would You Notice?
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by Crash on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:12:03 AM AEST
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this poem is soo well expressed, i am im-pressed. I can totally relate with this, i fell the same way most of the time. the last 2 lines, awesome!!!!
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