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Lost Soul
Contributed by
ChaosBound
on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:51:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sweet, sweet serenity
A long lost humanity
Left alone in a painless fear
Crying hard but cant shed a tear
Hoping hard that it will come to an end
Left alone, with out you my friend
The darkness is crawling through me
This is the way i wanted to be
Free from all the sorrow and pain
But because i was vain
I missed the things that would be lost
For there is a price to cover your heart in frost
You must be alone when you cross the line
Everything you love must be left behind.
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2004-03-15 12:51:05]
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Re: Lost Soul
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by Kie on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:23:54 PM AEST
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| This was so sad but it flowed nicely. Well done. Kie |
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Re: Lost Soul
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by arden on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:31:35 PM AEST
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very sad but it was beautifully written. i loved this. so well done. good work.
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Re: Lost Soul
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by LiquidChaos on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:37:31 PM AEST
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awesome write! i love how the whole thing flows...very sad and touching...keep rockin in the free world!
addie |
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