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your voice
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:28:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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something small inside me,
cries out through the tears,
'don't cry for him, fight all your fears',
I'm losing my mind and losing my soul,
but your voice keeps me sane,
from losing control.
you're always the one,
who's here when I cry,
telling me softly to dry my eyes,
keeping me loved,
and feeling alive,
I love you my friend,
without you I'd die.
thankyou for making me feel alive...
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lostinmyself
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2004-03-15 12:28:45]
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Re: your voice
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by Stitch on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 12:35:54 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful tribute. Reminds me of the way I feel about God.
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Re: your voice
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:53:36 PM AEST
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Beautifully done... reminds me of a friend of mine!
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Re: your voice
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 10:04:04 PM AEST
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this is beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: your voice
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by Dina on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:32:13 AM AEST
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| These words are really nice, what a good friend you've got. |
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Re: your voice
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:57:20 PM AEST
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Ah what beautiful dedicated poem! This person must be a treasure! Very well written poem! Enjoyed reading it!
Anne :D |
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Re: your voice
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:32:58 AM AEST
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This is just amazing. I loved every line. It has great rhythem to it, very sweet and touching, I enjoyed it a lot. It is remarkable how someones love can make us feel alive inside, it lifts our very soul and spirit.
Corinna |
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