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Titanic
Contributed by
ramfire
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Atlantic Ocean's cold and deep.
Water shows its darkened face.
Some souls then saved as by God's grace.
A lonely place where many sleep.
Now she's junk, broken queen below.
Do we want salvage, taking gold?
Disturbing graves with dives all bold.
With no respect that we should show?
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ramfire
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2004-03-14 21:53:56]
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Re: Titanic
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:04:25 PM AEST
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| Very powerful and thoughtful! Great write! |
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Re: Titanic
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:14:54 PM AEST
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I believe it should have been left untouched in its watery grave. It is ,afterall, the resting place of many souls. It should never have been desecrated.
Rita |
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Re: Titanic
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 09:51:04 AM AEST
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Love the line about the "broken queen." What great imagery!
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Re: Titanic
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 09:12:09 PM AEST
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| dearest laurie, this is brilliant, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Titanic
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:19:52 PM AEST
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| I've seen the movie and loved it. *also cried my eyes out* People should let her rest in peace. *S* Cynthia |
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