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Untitled
Contributed by
Lyssa
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 06:38:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Desperation drawn in deep
Sorrow and sadness make you weep
Pain and suffering of us all
The pain of knowing anything at all
The stares and snickers beat you down
The thought of knowing I’m the clown
Stupidity is running deep
I wish my heart would skip a beat
Knowing nothing and no one knowing
Is better than being slammed by a fairie
Who fills your head with thoughts of him
Making you fall for him
In the end it is a dream which will
Never be heard or seen
Copyright ©
Lyssa
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2004-03-14 18:38:14]
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Re: Untitled
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 07:01:44 PM AEST
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the pain of secret love and the wonders of our dreams....
Well written
Shari |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:00:38 PM AEST
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| Good poem. I'd call it " Useless or Stressful Dream." |
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Re: Untitled
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by HedderMarie on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:32:01 PM AEST
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You channel your emotions wondefully Lyssa, I can definelty relate to this...great write!
-Heather :) |
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