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waltz of the flows
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 05:57:31 PM in AEST
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There are many flows
some are mysterious
with visions that
waver
some have a taste
that you can savor......
innervisions
written with hands of clay
crescendo
with pleasure and pain,
oh so slowly
i am falling
into seduction
when the flow moans
"i love you."
teardrops exploding
on a dreamscapes of sensations
in a feild of roses i lay
dreaming of the way
sweet emotions make me sway.
Then there are flows
they are bitter
and fill you with anger
have you so off balance
that you become
a stranger.....
innervisions
of rage now pulsate
the pain of sorrow
rains
wrecking the landscape,
the frustration
is so great
i may never recover
sometimes the flows
can cause such pain.
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secretwind
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2004-03-14 17:57:31]
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Re: waltz of the flows
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by emystar on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 06:57:54 PM AEST
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Hi friend,
this is such a strong true write!
Hang tuff my friend as joy cometh in the morning.
Great work and it's good to see u posting again.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: waltz of the flows
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 07:07:01 PM AEST
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Great inner vision. This is a super piece of work.
Rita |
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Re: waltz of the flows
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by Kie on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 07:26:53 PM AEST
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| Superb! Loved the title and found your poem very interesting. Gives me something to ponder regarding the flows. Well done... Kie |
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