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hurting
Contributed by
eternityandaday4u
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 05:37:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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what is this feeling?
Longing for something past.
answer me! why do you hurt me so much?
you can't deny it now. the wrinkle of your cheeks when you used to smile still haunts my dreams.
the way you would laugh, even when i wasn't funny will always be engraved in my heart.
now there's a frown where a smile used to be.
stop blaming the world for your ignorance.
stop taking your pain out on us, we only yearn for something that your promised us from the beginning, your friendship and yet you build a wall.
your selfish and superficial. ever word you say is a contradiction or a put down. the words spill out of your mouth dripping with distain. i can't stand it any more your facial expressions, your looks and the way you try to make it work.
why do you try so hard? i can't do this any more. you deprive me of your friendship and yet through all of that it still does not satisfy you!
you long to hurt me more. that drives you to take away the one person that means so much to me, my one true companion.
HOW DARE YOU?!!!! why do you do this to me? why do you hate me?!!! I HATE YOU!
and still every single muscle and bone in my body LOVES YOU.
HOW WILL I EVER LET YOU GO?
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Re: hurting
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by emystar on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:13:15 PM AEST
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Very sad. U exspressed yourself well.
luv, huggs,
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Re: hurting
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:01:05 AM AEST
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This Is So Very Sad !!!!!! But You Have Written It So Well !!!!!!!!!!!! Keep Em Coming :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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