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Nostalgia
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:33:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Reminiscing of a past that’s gone
Pure reminders of contentment
Remorse for pain,
For new loneliness
And everything that’s gone
One moment it flashes quickly
Til I push it safe away
There’s no way it can be true,
It’s done
Right?
The flood of memories I shun
I don’t know what to do
For fear that my heart will betray
Frustration gathers thickly
Mounting on and on
I cry for sake of all of this
I wish for summer rain
I feel much like resentment
Of all this I’ve brought on
It can't be true, I know it
It's not supposed to be.
I'm supposed to be long gone
Supposed to...
But I'm not.
Copyright ©
liquidsunshine
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2004-03-14 13:33:42]
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Re: Nostalgia
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by bernard on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:22:46 PM AEST
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| I like the poem it is written i think when one is in one of those moods. Live your life to the full and have a great journey through the rest of your days from bernard. |
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Re: Nostalgia
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 06:03:18 PM AEST
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In my nostalgic moments summer rain reminds me of when i was a child, warm water running down my face....
But onto the more serious aspect of your poem a very good emotional write.
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Re: Nostalgia
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:19:30 PM AEST
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Take what you have learned from the past and make the future brighter. It can be done, I know, for I have done it.
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Re: Nostalgia
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:33:09 PM AEST
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LOVE the line about frustration!
Stitch |
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Re: Nostalgia
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 02:50:36 AM AEST
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Wishing for a brighter tomorrow.
Take care. Have hope!
David |
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