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Love
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:19:31 PM in AEST
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Just four letters
Full of meaning
That draw terror
With one mere sound.
It makes me weak.
My voice trembles.
It scares me so
To feel this way.
Feeling stronger
Than I know how.
How can it be
That one so weak
Can feel something
Of such power?
It consumes me
And I'm lost in
Just four letters
Full of meaning
That draw terror
With one mere sound.
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Re: Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 04:46:53 PM AEST
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Interesting thoughts on the subject.
Nice poem. |
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Re: Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 06:07:26 PM AEST
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it think it can draw such terror because it's such a powerful thing! that feeling of being consumed. Another good thought provoking write.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Love
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by gery_giggles on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:00:17 PM AEST
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its amazing how a little word can have such power over our lives...it can bring us together but tear us apart so fast.good write..
luv always |
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Re: Love
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:36:53 PM AEST
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Good job. I often think about that myself. How words are just so powerful. Especially the word "LOVE"!!! I don't feel like I'm worthy to even say the word, let alone feel it. Nicely written, Chelsea.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Love
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 02:42:02 AM AEST
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Truly love is the thunder that terrifies us to death, yet moments later it's the wisper that teaches us the full meaning of life.
Take care.
David |
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