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Cut
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:05:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Draw the blade across your skin
(tie yourself to the tracks)
(feel death speed toward you one second at a time)
(80mph suicide)
The first drop
(ecstasy)
Welcome to the most beautiful moment of your life
(don’t cry)
(you’ll enjoy it)
(it only hurts for a little while…)
Popcorn and candy floss memories – that first sweet kiss
Hands held in the park, those idle dreams, that idle wish
Black and white screen romance, float on clouds you can’t resist
Lying under silver stars and shadowed mist
Black roses and wasted tears, die again for all the things that you miss
(cut)
Honey, this is the closest to real love you’re ever gonna get
I’m just playing with the rush; it hasn’t killed me – yet
Watch your soul slowly fade away, one drop at a time…
Burn
(it hurts)
Don’t cry
It only hurts for a little while
(oh, it hurts)
The second drop
(bittersweet)
Smudged strawberry kisses you gave away
Those first clumsy moments that young love craves
Those mixed up feelings, his bittersweet taste
Ignorance is bliss, and you’re blind to the pain
Deliver your body to his pleasure, forever, once again
Embrace rock bottom in so many twisted ways
I’m just going through that never-ending, teenage (lifelong) phase
Bleed
(weep all those red tears)
These moments overwhelmed by you, lost in your soul
All those days buried inside you and your effervescent glow
Memories of each other, your life, my whole
Lost lovers stand on platforms, misty kisses, places unknown
All those innocent touches and feelings, where did they go?
The final drop
(numb)
And now these final moments are all that remain
Memories of undying love marred by this pain
Red scars, lipstick smudges and mascara stains
So empty, hoping with all your heart to change
And all you do is crave for that feeling again…
(save me)
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Re: Cut
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:32:21 PM AEST
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i wish i could save you..
i wish so many things it hurts..
and i wish i could write like you, or even half as well as you.. this is one of the most beautiful poems of yours i have read..
xxx |
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Re: Cut
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by Lessa on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:40:11 PM AEST
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| This is an amazingly great poem, i mean really. As a former cutter i think u discribed the feeling and the rush and the pleasure perfect here. Wow this is really a great write |
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Re: Cut
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:46:37 PM AEST
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Beautifully written..the style was different but by far great..
_-{Psych}-_ |
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Re: Cut
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:02:34 PM AEST
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i have to say you have really discribed the feeling, I'm suicidal and I've done alot and I couldn't ever think of a way to explain it but you have. Hang in there, it'll get beetter, I know cause I'm getting a little better everyday.
-Victoria- |
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Re: Cut
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:11:14 PM AEST
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| omg lucie, your poem so tragically breathtaking, your expression of soulful feeling has my mouth open, even if you werent someone so dear to me this would move me beyond words, my love for you is deep in my heart, and im in tears, i love you lucie, xxxxxxxx... |
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Re: Cut
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:16:52 PM AEST
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Wow hun, this is so beautiful, its...wow lol. I dont really know what else to say, Brilliant write hun
Love 'n Hugs
- Becca |
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Re: Cut
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 04:33:31 PM AEST
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Such a heart wrenching beautifully written write.
Awesome poem.
Keep it up. |
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Re: Cut
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by spacecowgirl53023 on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:30:51 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, I write like you do. I have been through depression, and am getting through it now. i understand how this poem is written, thou 'tis hard to. thank you for writing this, it has brought me back a few years....
-spacecowgirl53023~~ |
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Re: Cut
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 05:47:35 PM AEST
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this was so poignant it was breathtaking. if there's any talent in this messed up world it belongs to you this was so beautiful it transcends words.
Bobo (Joel) |
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:28:07 AM AEST
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wow...remember me? i haven't been on here in almost a year. but i remembered you and your elegant words and thought i'd drop in and catch up on your works. your writes continue to amaze me. your expressions are so beautiful...you have a way of reaching in to a persons soul...a way of making a person feel every emotion with a single word. i've said this before and i'll say it again: you have the most amazing talent i've ever seen...never give it up. ever. xoxo best wishes!
~ riki lynn ~ |
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