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I Love You
Contributed by
BrokenHeartedLass
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:48:59 AM in AEST
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My lips have never known your taste,
My hands have never touched your skin,
My eyes have never seen the passion,
that you have locked away within.
My mind has never understood,
My soul can not comprehend,
My heart can not bear
to be broken once again.
My thoughts betray me like before,
My actions are reckless at best,
My spirit refuses to be broken,
at the hands of love's true test.
Your face I long to behold,
Your words have set me free,
Your love is just the key I need,
to unlock the passion inside of me.
Your heart beats in time with mine,
Your thoughts I can control,
Your mind knows it has found its solace,
sheltered in the shadows of my soul.
Our time to hide has quickly passed,
Our future has now begun,
Our lives will slowly start to entwine,
until we live as one.
My plea is that you come to me,
Your doubts tossed into the wind,
Our lives together will be beautiful,
free to fly, to fall, and to love again.
Copyright ©
BrokenHeartedLass
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2004-03-14 10:48:59]
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Re: I Love You
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by lostinlimbo on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 11:27:45 AM AEST
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I cannot exactly put into words how your writing makes me feel other than to tell you that I sighed in feeling ful association and smiled proudly after the read. You dear are gifted and blessed with the ability to convey emotions into poetic form like very few can. You can count on me reading this one, and your others, over numerous times. Wow..
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Re: I Love You
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:01:19 PM AEST
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Wow. I really can identify and connect with this poem. It is strikingly well written. I can also identify with "Kevy's" comment.
I picked your poem to read because of the author's comments. If you read my poem called "Love" and the other called "Nostalgia"
you might realize that I often wonder if I'm really in love as well. Love is a simple yet complex and confusing emotion and I love the way you've written about it in this poem.
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Re: I Love You
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by Pompous on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:45:27 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, your words describe everything so well, I can relate to it so much such brilliance |
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Re: I Love You
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by AmandaBeth on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:16:59 PM AEST
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| I love this poem..I have never eally experienced love like this, your words are well written. |
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