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The essence of drowning
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:40:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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life is a funny thing
sometimes you care sometimes you don't
time passes quickly
good things never last that long,
something always
always goes wrong
it is so very hard
to just relax and trust.
Adventures become memories
visions
without sound
silent movies
torturing your mind,
my damage is so
D
E
E
P
that i have forgotten why
why i cry
and stay awake all night.
Looking out the window
wondering
if i'll ever go outside again
do i need love
or do i just miss the lust,
i just wanna feel
without selling my soul
i don't know
maybe i think to much.......
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secretwind
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2004-03-14 09:40:46]
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Re: The essence of drowning
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by lapse on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:36:09 AM AEST
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i hear you and feel you..dont sell your soul to lust...because in trying to stop the lonely pain with it you also sell your love far far cheaper than its priceless worth. i feel every word that you have written.....so much that i used to value has been trivialised while i stand there as if on the sidelines and scream for it to stop. you arent alone...and you, me, and everyone else like us when combined, makes a love and a person worth living for.
thankyou. regardless the meaning of this to you i feel so much less alone now. |
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Re: The essence of drowning
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:16:41 PM AEST
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another great poem! don't give up...
that's what people on this site keep telling me! we all know it's hard, but we have to get through... |
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Re: The essence of drowning
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by emystar on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 07:08:39 PM AEST
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Hi friend,
Jus keep writing, as u know it certainly helps.
Remember, I'm here for u friend anytime.
I know what ya mean about luv. We keep telling ourselfs we don't need it but deep inside we know we do.
Hang in there friend, this too soon shall pass.
luv, huggs,
emystar@msn.com
Oh good work. I think we can all relate to this write in one way or the other. |
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Re: The essence of drowning
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by Kie on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:18:03 PM AEST
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| I've found the longer I go without sleep the more extreme my thoughts get and at times I battle insanity it seems. I also think too much! I liked this poem alot and if you need someone to talk to let me know. Kie |
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Re: The essence of drowning
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by dead_beauty on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:06:27 PM AEST
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| Hi there! This is one of the best poems I've read on this site. I love, love, love it! And the title is great! :)~ravenghost |
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