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A Dream
Contributed by
darien
on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:19:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The beauty of the words
I write
Comes to you in the notes
I strike
Envisioned in a hidden
Home
That only I have ever
Known
But sent to you as just a
Taste
Of what lies hidden beneath my
Face
In mind, I keep, my gentle
Tune
And later give it breathing
Room
To take to wing and grow in
Size
And form into a butter-
Fly
That floats away: a story for
You
But for me: a dream come
True
Copyright ©
darien
... [
2004-03-14 03:19:24]
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Re: A Dream
(User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:27:32 AM AEST
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| I know this phrase is way overused on this site, but wow. That was just beautiful and gentle, you've crafted a soothing poem that belies your talent as a writer. |
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Re: A Dream
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 07:37:47 PM AEST
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Interesting imagery, you evoke, with good flow. Your rhyme structure is unique, and certainly caught my eye.
Well done. |
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