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Hugs Not Kisses
Contributed by
stalkee
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:32:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Baby, we almost had something special
We almost had something so unreal
But I killed it,
I know all I'll ever feel,
are your hugs and not kisses
And I've sung this song too much,
it's all becoming routine...
I can feel the little un-lit spark,
between us start to die
And I've labled myself a coward,
whenever it comes to love
'Cause I can never tell you how I feel,
I can never show you how I feel
And I've now destroyed my belief in hope
And I have now adopted pessimism
The glass is empty,
everythings gonna go wrong
Copyright ©
stalkee
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2004-03-14 02:32:42]
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Re: Hugs Not Kisses
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:07:42 AM AEST
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| Wow.......very powerful, great way to protray your emotions! I hope the best for you! |
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Re: Hugs Not Kisses
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 07:27:40 AM AEST
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| It's all becoming routine......ain't that the truth.....well done good write. |
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Re: Hugs Not Kisses
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by Kie on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:36:29 PM AEST
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| The third stanza was incredible. I commend you on a great poem. Kie |
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Re: Hugs Not Kisses
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 07:55:17 PM AEST
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| awww so sad! very well written! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hugs Not Kisses
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:57:52 PM AEST
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| Considering Jackie Chan is cool..In ur words..I found nothing here to keep any form of intrest |
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