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Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part One (The Intro)
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:24:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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I sit here looking out the window.
What I'm looking for,
It's not here.
What is it I'm looking for anyway?
I don't know.
It's a bright day,
A blue, cloudless sky.
I see the people,
But, yet, I see through them.
It is as if they are nothing
But a figment of my imagination,
A hologram, if you will.
I look out across the field,
I see memories
Through the transparecies
Of the people in between,
Memories of past love,
Of when I played on it,
Both in football
And as a member of the band.
My sister walks by on her lunch.
Now, in a sense,
I'm looking for someone,
The girl I love but who hates me.
Now the people are crowding my view,
I wish they'd move.
I haven't seen her yet,
You must be wondering by now,
What's the point I'm trying to make?
I intend to tell a story,
And this is the lead-up.
Rather lame, isn't it?
You see,
I'm at school,
And establishing a setting,
Harmony Grove High School,
In Camden, Arkansas.
This is where the story begins...
Copyright ©
Solmyr1404
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2004-03-14 02:24:46]
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Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part One (The Intro)
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:03:18 AM AEST
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| Good write! Keep them coming |
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Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part One (The Intro)
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by emystar on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 04:20:45 AM AEST
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Well good work.
so do u live in Camdon, Arkansas.
I don't live far from there.
I'm in Star City, Arkansas.
Well I'm waiting for the rest of your story.
It's a small world, hug.
luc, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part One (The Intro)
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:20:05 PM AEST
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keep up the good work for the next parts
~allyson~ |
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