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Am I Now Invisible?
Contributed by
EileenK
on
Sunday, 15th September 2002 @ 02:07:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Now that my face is looking older
And my younger days have passed
Why does it seem each year
Goes quicker than the last?
Why am I now less noticable
Than I was before
Am I now invisible
Or have I become a bore?
Have I nothing to contribute
To this world we live in now
Because I am not the right age
Or have I forgotten how?
Do we now live in a world
Of out with the old, in with the new
Why do I feel like this
At only 42!
Copyright ©
EileenK
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2002-09-15 14:07:58]
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Re: Am I Now Invisible?
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by chatabox on
Sunday, 15th September 2002 @ 08:03:31 PM AEST
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Eileen!!!!....no, no no no no......I am in my 40`s and life cant be better.....lets go show them girl just what us "experienced woman can do"
Lovely lovely write
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Re: Am I Now Invisible?
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by EileenK on
Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 10:51:40 AM AEST
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| lol thanks for that. I have read some of your poems .. they are fun. |
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Re: Am I Now Invisible?
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:18:44 AM AEST
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magnificent work
on this poem . |
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Re: Am I Now Invisible?
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 12:22:16 PM AEST
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Fourth read best yet. 42? (I'm late 70's) Invisible? don't you believe it!
Great last verse/last line, made me smile out loud
Sorry about the spelling mistakes in read three, pressed the OK button by mistake |
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