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Untitled
Contributed by
BrokenHeartedLass
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:09:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Afraid to be together
but too lonely to be apart
I don't want you to see
the darkness inside my heart
I'd scare you with my thoughts
You'd run and never look back
I can't trust you to love me
with all of the emotions that I lack.
I'm cold and empty inside
Hidden, for none to see
I can't show you who I am
For fear that you would leave me.
I think I'm falling in love
but it could never last
so go on, leave me now
you're just a memory in my past.
Copyright ©
BrokenHeartedLass
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2004-03-14 02:09:27]
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Re: Untitled
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:34:33 AM AEST
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| i liked this...good work!...Stalkee |
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Re: Untitled
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:37:15 AM AEST
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| Ahhh...I'm going to print this out and show this to my brother, he is feeling like this right now. Each verse has style and radiates uncertainty and longing battling each other. In the end, it's still you that has to decide whether to move on or stay in the shadows. |
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Re: Untitled
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:48:03 AM AEST
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| EXCELLENT...i feel the flow on this one....good write.... |
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Re: Untitled
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by lostinlimbo on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 11:21:15 AM AEST
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Wow.. I can associate with this in so many ways.. so beautifully written.. don't EVER doubt the fact that you are very talented.
-Kevy |
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:32:57 PM AEST
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| So well I know the words you say, loved the poem. Roses to you and hope the reward finds her contest. |
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