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This Person
Contributed by
hotrod55
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Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:48:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There is a person i onced loved,
there is a pereson i used to trust,
I used to love this person untill one fatal day,
the fatal day our love went away.
This person i learned loved someone else,
this person had no room in his heart for me, as you can see i have no person anymore,
he still calls me a lier and a whore.
I used to love this person untill that day,
but now he wishes i would go away.
But i cant go away form my love, for you see
this Person used to love me, and i hope still dose, but untill that day i will keep thinking about that person.
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Re: This Person
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:22:59 AM AEST
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| Wow powerful! Great job! |
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Re: This Person
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by Justalady on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:08:41 PM AEST
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| speaking from the heart one can easily see in this hotrod. A little work on the spelling, and this is a fine piece. Thanks for commenting on my work. June |
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Re: This Person
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by charmer on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:43:26 AM AEST
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Oh jackie that is such a powerful poem!!! It was a very great write!!! Love ya!!(dearly)
Your Friend,
CHARMER |
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