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Just Don't Understand
Contributed by
lilch4ever
on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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How I feel inside you'll never know the real reason why.
Because somehow the reason still hides.
How I feel inside you'll never know the real reason
why.
Because you're substle, cripple minded and blind.
How I feel inside you'll never know the real reason why.
I tell my side but you only see the downside.
So I continue to still hide.
I hurt like the bone chilling cold.
All the pain I always still hold.
I'm not bold enough to shut out the cold.
I'm not bold enough to break this mold.
Because I know how things will unfold.
The rage, the bitterness.
Sometimes I just don't understand.
Many times can't withstand.
Hurtful words constantly descend.
How am I suppose to depend?
Decries and sudden lies.
When many things are tided.
Dark and deadly secrets kept all inside.
Wishes to tell but I have to continue to hide.
Surely not my choice but I simply can't voice.
Firey tears yet more things appear.
I only wish things were clear.
Sudden anger and rage.
I only wish it was clear.
How I feel inside you'll never know the real reason
why.
Because you only see just one side.
Because you only see the things you rather keep hidden.
Because you only see the other side as innonect, an angel.
How substle, cripple minded and blind.
The other side a victium you see.
Yet what am I?
How I feel inside you'll never know the real reason
why.
Because you don't understand the reason why.
You'll never know the reason because you only cater to just one side.
That's why you'll never understand my side.
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lilch4ever
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2004-03-13 22:23:50]
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Re: Just Don't Understand
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:48:18 PM AEST
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Very well-written. I really liked the style. But there are some things that are not supposed to be understood. There can be things that don't need to be understood.
Nobody can see or understand everything. |
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Re: Just Don't Understand
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by Pompous on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:36:16 AM AEST
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| a feeling many many teenagers go through very well written |
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Re: Just Don't Understand
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by AliB on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:55:04 AM AEST
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| Great poem, why don't you tell your parents what it is you feel you can't? I'm a mother of a mixed up teenage and pray everyday that he'll finally tell me whats on his mind. I am ready to listen to him when he's ready to talk, maybe your parents aren't fully aware of your troubles. If its serious stuff can you talk to anybody else, you can PM me if you want to talk, I'll listen ok? |
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