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Life
Contributed by
Dina
on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 04:56:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is so strange
sometimes it gives
sometimes it takes.
Sometimes you are happy
sometimes you are sad
but when you are all alone
you start thinking of it
will we ever understand
is there something in our hand.
Do we have any control
do we have any true role
are we really living
or is it just a dream?
Sometimes I really believe
that when it is time to leave
there will be more of us
standing in the same bus
waiting for their stop as well
waiting until they hear their bell
that tells them it is your turn
and some more will be born
to repeat what we have done
until they too are gone.
Does anybody know
the meaning of Life
If you do, just let me know.
Copyright ©
Dina
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2004-03-13 16:56:50]
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Re: Life
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 06:20:16 PM AEST
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| Wow! Great job! |
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 09:56:45 PM AEST
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| Wonderful Write Loved It.......TC......Love AnGel |
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Re: Life
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 11:13:20 PM AEST
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Nice . Good thought .
Whisper |
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Re: Life
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:34:59 PM AEST
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Intriging and inciteful, well written piece...well done
Love Dawny x |
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