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*!* Your Smile *!*
Contributed by
justjames
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Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 03:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You’re beautiful,
You’re amazing,
You’re the most wonderful person in the world,
I’ll see you in the hall tomorrow,
And i’ll wink at you,
And you’ll give that cute little smile that i love,
And made me fall for you in the first place,
You’ll have no idea,
Just how i feel,
You think i just like you,
But it’s much more than that,
But...
You’ll never know,
Just how i feel,
I have no chance with you,
You’re just too amazing,
You’re just too beautiful,
You’re the most wonderful person in the world,
And i don’t deserve someone like you.
That smile i get,
Is all i have,
But it’s enough,
That’s all i need,
To know you’re there,
And you notice me.
Your smile.
Copyright ©
justjames
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2004-03-13 15:11:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
(User Rating: 1 ) by Steb3544 on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 04:06:04 PM AEST (User
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give it time...
they'll notice you..:)
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:01:40 PM AEST (User
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wow great write give it time she'll come around .........Love AnGel......... |
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
(User Rating: 1 ) by 6_2 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:47:44 AM AEST (User
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This is like the most amazing thing I have ever read!!!! I would go crazy if a guy wrote something like this for me. Did you show this to the girl? If you did, She would probably fall in love with you, just from this!
I hope to read more amazing pieces from you!!!!!!!! |
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
(User Rating: 1 ) by linagalMBfan01 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 10:01:26 AM AEST (User
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this is an awesome poem!!!!!!!!! how did u ever come up with this?? it's great!!!!! |
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Re: *!* Your Smile *!*
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 09:46:54 AM AEST (User
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wow, thank you all for commenting on my poems! i really didnt think they were all that great, i guess i just have good inspiration |
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