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Can't Take It
Contributed by
Angelchild
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Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:51:12 PM in AEST
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I get so tired of the way you act
Sometimes I think you really wanna get smacked
You can look at me and all I say
As if I'm some nut you want out of your way
I may be lost and I may not know
But I'm not the one who lets my obsessions flow
I think you're trying to be someone you're not
Not that you've got him, I guess you think your hot
Sometimes we're like best friends
Other times, like this, its the end
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Angelchild
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2004-03-13 13:51:12]
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Re: Can't Take It
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by MorbidMongrel on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:57:08 PM AEST
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| Once upon a time I was like the person that you're writing about.... Takes a lot to realize what you've done and the people you've hurt in the process. In time she'll see the error in her ways, as I have. Good write! |
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Re: Can't Take It
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:58:18 PM AEST
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| good job! I have a nephew...when someone needs a smack he always says, "you wanna fresh one?" LOL. I think he's hilarious....go ahead...give her a fresh one. If her head ever comes out. rotflmao...great poem. |
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Re: Can't Take It
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 08:29:01 PM AEST
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I like the way you did this....a great expression of emotions.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Can't Take It
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:49:14 PM AEST
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Ive been here, it hurts so much when your friends brush you aside like you mean nothing. Excellent poem...well done
Love Dawny x |
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