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Coercive Visions
Contributed by
MorbidMongrel
on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:49:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Stacatto ringing in my Ears
Scourge Eyes
Rinse
Wash
Repeat
Don't ask me to recall for what I have seen
He's not coming back
Left on a morning train
Bound for Elsewhere
Farewell my Friend
Medication
Makes it all go away
Into a blurry state of
Utter solitude
He's not coming back
That was not him
That was not her
They don't exist anymore
Forget I ever said this
Forget I called
Forget we met
Forget you
Silver bladed coercion
Friendship, a farce
Never was, never were, never will be
Head swimming in a mirky pool of comatosed confusion
Copyright ©
MorbidMongrel
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2004-03-13 13:49:46]
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Re: Coercive Visions
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:01:13 PM AEST
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| know the feeling..going through it now...want to sleep and never wake up..great write! |
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Re: Coercive Visions
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 07:03:06 PM AEST
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Been there done that, yet the memory lingers, where I wish it was burned out forever.
Excellent topic, awesome write, keep it up. |
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Re: Coercive Visions
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by Saitou-sama on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 08:38:54 PM AEST
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| I can totally relate. It does get better though. I swear. I wouldn't be here if it doesn't. Great poem, by the by. You really captured the feeling. Keep up the good work! ^^ |
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