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Yankee Doodle
Contributed by
AliB
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Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 11:14:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Yankee doodle might be dandy
But he gives me such a fright
'Cause sometimes I need a brandy
In the middle of the night
Someone's trying to tell me something
What it is I do not know
Wish they'd send a letter or email
Thinking of calling in a pro
Don't make light of my situation
For I'm getting pretty scared
I know it's not my imagination
Into the darkness I dare not stare
I hear the tune of Yankee doodle
A jewellery box that's being played
But I don't have one, I'm in a muddle
And my nerves are slightly frayed
So whats my message I ask you spirit?
What is it that you want to say?
'Cause I'll not rest, I will not leave it
Until in peace you finally lay
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Re: Yankee Doodle
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 11:31:27 AM AEST
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| wow... if the feeling good or bad..... good is of god.. bad its of the devil.. but god says. he didnt give us a spirit of fear.. greater that is in us then he that is in the world........... sandy .. good poem like how you made it rhyme. |
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Re: Yankee Doodle
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 05:03:48 PM AEST
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I frequently need a brandy in the middle of the night!
This is a good write for me it had an eeriness to it
I hear the tune of Yankee doodle
A jewellery box that's being played
But I don't have one, I'm in a muddle
And my nerves are slightly frayed
So whats my message I ask you spirit?
What is it that you want to say?
'Cause I'll not rest, I will not leave it
Until in peace you finally lay
excellent wildejohnny |
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Re: Yankee Doodle
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 06:19:59 PM AEST
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| dearest ali, great write, they bug me too, lol, maybe its something in the air? hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Yankee Doodle
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:51:05 PM AEST
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Hi Ali
This poem really portrays your feelings, excellent descriptions and imagery. Im sure your Gran will get throught to you what shes trying to say, in the meantime try not to be scared, it cant hurt you. Here if you need me, as always. Take care dear friend
Love Dawny x |
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