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Invisible
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 08:30:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm the no one you see,
The loner lurking the crowded halls
Faces give me unwanted glares
Alone in the cold, it feels hallow
Invisible,
I want to escape from this prison
This place is a never escaping hell
I scream a spoken word, which no one hears
I walk solo,
On my own, without anyone.
Copyright ©
Crimson_Rose
... [
2004-03-12 20:30:54]
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Re: Invisible
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 08:33:53 PM AEST
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| This is a really powerful poem, that hit right down deep. An awesome write |
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Re: Invisible
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by kayald on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 08:57:27 PM AEST
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this i can really relate to because it reminds me so much of the high school drama and heirarchies and baloney that i cant take....awesome and powerful write
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Re: Invisible
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 08:59:07 PM AEST
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I CAN HEAR AND I HAVE FELT THE COLD
GREAT WRITE |
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Re: Invisible
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:49:56 AM AEST
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| Great write, I've felt this way before. |
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