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Tidal
Contributed by
and_abashed
on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 12:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Let me swim in my reflection-
For just a little while.
Please ,
oh please-
But wait!
I cannot swim!
Too late, too late-
Already I am under-
-the ocean waves-
To me,
O! I am drown’d .
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2004-03-12 12:43:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Tidal
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 12:47:28 PM AEST (User
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I loved the first stanza, and the way it turned so quickly, but the drowning was kinda expected at that point.
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