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Hallowe'en
Contributed by
Dan666
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Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 09:38:11 AM in AEST
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Hallowe"en
One, gloomy, Hallowe"en night
Kids knocking on pumpkin painted doors.
The laughter of the vampire,
Shatters the streets around.
Costumed children terrorise the neighbourhood.
Bats fly across the sky,
Like witches on their broomsticks,
Ruling the sky.
Wizards wearing long, tall, hats,
Hover over their cauldron.
Copyright ©
Dan666
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2004-03-12 09:38:11]
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Re: Hallowe'en
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by LiquidChaos on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 09:50:47 AM AEST
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| sweet. i like. but i think you could do more with it--make it longer, tell a story. it's definately got potential tho! keep writing! |
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Re: Hallowe'en
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by AliB on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 10:12:04 AM AEST
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Actually he was 10 when he wrote this, duhhh!! How they forget.
Well done Dan, of course I'm biased but I'm sooooo proud.
Welcome to my other "family"
Mum xx |
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Re: Hallowe'en
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:55:10 PM AEST
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You have a talent for making your writing so realistic with your descriptions, I cant believe your only 14 Dan. This is excellent, keep them coming
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Hallowe'en
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:15:29 PM AEST
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10? 12? still good stuff! keep 'em coming.
wildejohnny. |
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