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The Cry of the Loon
Contributed by
monkey
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Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:38:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~
the cry
of the loon
soothes my thoughts
swallowing
me up
into a world
of peace
and beauty
drowning me
in true paradise
~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~**~
Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-03-11 23:38:46]
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Re: The Cry of the Loon
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:49:10 PM AEST
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from so few words I was able to see and hear this scene.... takes a talented writer to make that happen. ;o)
Very well done
Larry
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Re: The Cry of the Loon
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 12:00:12 AM AEST
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| absolutely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Cry of the Loon
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 02:34:53 AM AEST
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| So few words, so much beauty. Well done. |
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Re: The Cry of the Loon
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by Alli on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:35:21 AM AEST
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| The title caught my eye, reminds me of New Hampshire, very nice poem, with so few words, you say so much. |
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