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Crying
Contributed by
WannaDieCuzImEMO
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:56:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I cry and I cry
and I do try and dry
my tears, but it's with a wet towel
it won't hold my fears
for it's full of memories, foul
they were happy at the time
but now it makes me cry
everything does
it's not how it was
I can't scream silently
and turn on myslef violently
I can't keep myself loney company
because everyone I know has shunned me
so now I weep
so that life I can keep
maybe not forever
until the I'll shed a
tear or two
and think of me and you
and of our alive, yet dying love
and know, it's this hand that fits the glove
Copyright ©
WannaDieCuzImEMO
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2004-03-11 20:56:52]
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Re: Crying
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by neglected1 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:07:22 PM AEST
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I really dont know what to say...
~I applaud you~
i enjoyed this... you put so much meaning into it and i like your free style..
keep it up
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Re: Crying
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by Levi on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:16:26 PM AEST
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| I love freestyle. It keeps you out of the box and allows you to express so much more. Awesome. I understood a little bit of this, I'm a big dunce when it comes to poetry, but it is so easily written and the meaning so plain and clear. How could I not get at least some. Spectacular. Thank you for posting this. I loved it. |
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Re: Crying
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:03:57 PM AEST
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wow, Im speechless....Im late on reading your work...well I hope you are still hear today....keep up the work...please...I love it
much love,
Dani |
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