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What Can I Do?
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
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Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:56:55 PM in AEST
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What can I do?
I've fallen in love with you.
I've given you the heart from my chest,
Something I've done for none of the rest.
You said you loved me,
But now THAT I cannot see
To be true,
So how can you
Lie to me this way?
When explaining your anger towards me you say
I lied to you, yet
You're the one being a hypocrite!
You told me not to write you notes anymore,
You ripped my heart apart and threw it to the floor.
How is it that though you're being a little *****,
This feeling of love comes back like the Seven-year Itch?
What can I do
To get rid of my love for you?
Why don't I just give up
And let you see what you're giving up?
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Solmyr1404
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2004-03-11 15:56:55]
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Re: What Can I Do?
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by Remy on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:59:57 PM AEST
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ooo, drama... i'd suggest a few things, but i'll just take the write for what it is - masterpiece, an emo psycho masterpiece. lol... good write!@ ;0)
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Re: What Can I Do?
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:21:37 PM AEST
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| very nice write but yet very sad. I don't see how anyone who is in love can base there relationship on lies.sry that's just how I feel.... Love Angel |
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Re: What Can I Do?
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 05:51:49 PM AEST
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Some people are blind and throw away a good thing. I like this, it will get better
*J* |
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